Monkey老师小作文模板
一、写作模板
小作文分类:小作文三分归元法
首段—表明来信的目的:
次要目的（客套礼节)+主要目的(题千重点描写要求的部分)
Dear xx,
l am writing this letter to(信件类)/This notice is to (公告类)
次要目的:
do sth/thank you/congratulate you/apologize for doing sth and to)
主要目的:
- offer some suggestions/information about sth/how to do sth.
给出关于某事/如何做某事的建议/信息【建议、介绍、混合】 - extend you an invitation to do sth.
邀请你做某事 - recommend you sth
推荐给你某事物 - do sth
做某事
尾段—对读信人的期望:是否需要对方回信?
否:(公告、招募、问询...)→没有需求，创造需求
l would be glad if you find the information/ suggestions mentioned above helpful.Please feel free to let me know if you have any further questions.
希望以上信息/建议对你有用。如果有其它问题请随时与我联系。
是:(建议、介绍、推荐、感谢、道歉、邀请、投诉、申请..)→期待回复
l would appreciate it if you could take my complaint / application/ resignation/recommendation/ invitation/questions into consideration.And I am looking forward to your favorable reply.
希望你能重视或认真考虑我的投诉/申请/辞职/建议/邀请/问题。期待你的回复。
第二段—主体段
整体架构
Regarding...(主题词) , there are several points l would mostly like to mention.
First of all,
What's more,
In addition,
For more details, you could refer to the attachment(附件) below. (29词)
具体内容
世界怎么了?我们怎么办?
三元:是什么(说明介绍)、为什么(原因分析)、怎么办(建议意见)
1.是什么(说明介绍)
① 时间地点:它将于下周日在xx地点举行(请保证你有时间)
it will be held at the Main Building/具体地点next Sunday ( and please make sure you are available then).
问询版: will it be held at the Main Building/具体地点next Sunday ?
② 出席人物:我们的工作人员届时会提供十些必要的培训、介绍、引导。
our staff will be there to provide some necessary orientation/guidance.
问询版:will your staff be there to provide some necessary/ orientation?
③ 着装要求:出席活动时，着装应该得体
it is highly recommended to be properly dressed for the occasion.
问询版: is there any dress code recommended for the occasion?
三分归元——肯定、否定、疑问【根据具体情况可以改写为肯定句/否定句/疑问句】
2为什么(分析利弊)
① 权威认可获得了政府的官方奖项、资质、认可...
have an official award/qualification/recognition from the government.
问询版: Does it have an official award from the government ?
② 群众基础:人民群众很欢迎、评价很高、很关注担心ta
enjoy a widespread popularity/reputation/concern among人民群众
问询版: Does it enjoy a widespread reputation among人民群众?
③ 个人喜欢:我个人觉得xx很有吸引力、有趣、有益
l personally find it attractive/interesting/beneficial do sth).
问询版: Do you personally find it beneficial to do sth?
3.怎么办(建议意见)
① 端正认识:建立起关于xx的正确价值观是首要任务
it's advisable to establish up a correct value about sth primarily
② 理论与经验:你可以寻求该领域的相关/先进经验
you could look for relevant/advanced experiences in this aspect
③ 知行合一:应该制定合理可行的计划井坚持
a practical and reasonable plan should be carried out and stuck to.
二、小作文审题要点
对方是谁?
决定了信的抬头
是不是notice ?
决定了第一段第一句是letter还是notice
次要目的是什么?
主要目的是什么?
决定了第一段的写法
信件的实质内容涉及三元中的哪些元素?
决定了第二段用哪些句子一是什么?为什么?怎么办?
是否必须需要对方回信?
决定了第三段的写法
【实例】建议意见型:2016年英语二小作文
Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend, Jack, wrote an email to congratulate you and ask for advice on translation. Write him a reply to
1) thank him, and
2) give your advice.
Dear Jack,
l am writing this letter to thank you and give you some advice on translation.
Regarding translation, there are several points l would mostly like to mention. First of all,it' s advisable to establish up a correct value about translation primarily. What s more, you could look for advanced experiences in Zhihu. In addition, a practical and reasonable study plan should be promptly carried out and stuck to. For more details, you could refer to the attachment below.
l would be glad if you find the suggestions mentioned above helpful. Please feel free to let me know if you have any further questions.
Your truly,
Li Ming
【实例】杂糅型:2019年英语二小作文
Suppose Professor Smith asked you to plan a debate on the theme of city traffic. Writehim an email to
1) suggest a specific topic with your reasons, and
2) tell him about yourarrangements.
对方是谁? Professor Smith
是不是notice ?不是
次要目的是什么?无
主要目的是什么? 1) suggest a specific topic with your reasons, and 2) tell himabout yourarrangements.
信件的实质内容涉及三元中的哪些元素?为什么选ta ?是什么?
是否必须需要对方回答?否
Dear Professor Smith,
l am writing this letter to suggest a specific topic and inform you my arrangements about the debate.
Regarding the debate, there are several points l would mostly like to mention. First of all, Didi Taxi enjoys a widespread popularity/concern among the citizens. What's more, I personally find it attractive to debate over this topic. In addition, the debate will be held at the Main Building next Sunday and our staff will be there to provide some necessary orientation. For more details, you could refer to the attachment below.
l would be glad if you find the information mentioned above helpful. Please feel free to let me know if you have any further questions.
Your truly,
Li Ming
亲爱的史密斯教授,
我写这封信是想给出一个具体的辩论话题并告诉你辩论会的安排。关于辩论会，我想说以下几点。首先,人们对滴滴打车的问题普遍表示关切。其次,我个人也觉得对这个主题的探讨非常引人入胜。此外辩论会将于下周日在主楼举行，我们的人员届时将会在那提供必要的引导。关于辩论会的更多细节，您可以参阅下方的附件。
希望以上提及的信息对您有所帮助。如果您有任何其他问题,请随时联系我。
您真诚的，李明。
【实例】杂糅型:2020年英语二小作文
Suppose you are planning a tour of a historical site for a group of international students.Write them an email to
1) tell them about the site, and
2) give them some tips for thetour.
对方是谁? a group of international students
是不是notice ?不是
次要目的是什么?无
主要目的是什么? 1) tell them about the site, and 2) give them some tips forthe tour.
信件的实质内容涉及三元中的哪些元素?为什么选ta ?是什么?
是否必须需要对方回答?否
Dear International Students,
l am writing this letter to offer you some information about the historical site and give you some tips for the tour.
Regarding the tour, there are several points l would mostly like tomention. First of all, the Great Wall enjoys a widespread popularity among Chinese people and has an official award from the United Nations. What' s more, our staff will be there to provide some necessary orientation. In addition, it is highly recommended to be properly dressed for the occasion. For more details, you could refer to the attachment below.
l would be glad if you find the information mentioned above helpful. Please feel free to let me know if you have any further questions.
Your truly,
Li Ming